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<article article-type="research-article" dtd-version="1.3" xmlns:mml="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:xsi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance" xml:lang="ru"><front><journal-meta><journal-id journal-id-type="publisher-id">voplit</journal-id><journal-title-group><journal-title xml:lang="ru">Вопросы литературы</journal-title><trans-title-group xml:lang="en"><trans-title>Voprosy literatury</trans-title></trans-title-group></journal-title-group><issn pub-type="ppub">0042-8795</issn><publisher><publisher-name>Avtonomnaja nekommercheskaja organizacija Redakcija zhurnala kritiki i literaturovedenija «Voprosy literatury»</publisher-name></publisher></journal-meta><article-meta><article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.31425/0042-8795-2025-2-40-48</article-id><article-id custom-type="elpub" pub-id-type="custom">voplit-811</article-id><article-categories><subj-group subj-group-type="heading"><subject>Research Article</subject></subj-group><subj-group subj-group-type="section-heading" xml:lang="ru"><subject>ЛИТЕРАТУРНОЕ СЕГОДНЯ / Язык современной поэзии</subject></subj-group><subj-group subj-group-type="section-heading" xml:lang="en"><subject>RUSSIAN LITERATURE TODAY / Contemporary Poetic Language</subject></subj-group></article-categories><title-group><article-title>Как я начинал работу с бурят-монгольской рифмой. Опыт перевода</article-title><trans-title-group xml:lang="en"><trans-title>How I approached Buryat-Mongolian rhyme. Practical translation</trans-title></trans-title-group></title-group><contrib-group><contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="yes"><name-alternatives><name name-style="eastern" xml:lang="ru"><surname>Улзытуев</surname><given-names>А. Д.</given-names></name><name name-style="western" xml:lang="en"><surname>Ulzytuev</surname><given-names>A. D.</given-names></name></name-alternatives><bio xml:lang="ru"><p>Улзытуев Амарсана Дондокович - поэт, независимый исследователь.</p><p>125375, Москва, Б. Гнездниковский пер., д. 10</p></bio><bio xml:lang="en"><p>Amarsana D. Ulzytuev - poet, independent researcher.</p><p>10 Bolshoy Gnezdnikovsky Ln., Moscow, 125375</p></bio><email xlink:type="simple">kolumb999@gmail.com</email></contrib></contrib-group><pub-date pub-type="collection"><year>2025</year></pub-date><pub-date pub-type="epub"><day>12</day><month>04</month><year>2025</year></pub-date><volume>0</volume><issue>2</issue><fpage>40</fpage><lpage>48</lpage><permissions><copyright-statement>Copyright &amp;#x00A9; Avtonomnaja nekommercheskaja organizacija Redakcija zhurnala kritiki i literaturovedenija «Voprosy literatury», 2025</copyright-statement><copyright-year>2025</copyright-year><copyright-holder xml:lang="ru">Avtonomnaja nekommercheskaja organizacija Redakcija zhurnala kritiki i literaturovedenija «Voprosy literatury»</copyright-holder><copyright-holder xml:lang="en">Avtonomnaja nekommercheskaja organizacija Redakcija zhurnala kritiki i literaturovedenija «Voprosy literatury»</copyright-holder><license xlink:href="https://www.voplit.com/jour/about/submissions#copyrightNotice" xlink:type="simple"><license-p>https://www.voplit.com/jour/about/submissions#copyrightNotice</license-p></license></permissions><self-uri xlink:href="https://www.voplit.com/jour/article/view/811">https://www.voplit.com/jour/article/view/811</self-uri><abstract><p>В статье поэта, переводчика А. Улзытуева идет речь об особенностях бурят-монгольской рифмы, соответствующей технике «толгой холбох», что подразумевает рифмовку начала, а не конца стихотворных строк.</p><p>О своей работе с подобной рифмой Улзытуев рассказывает на примере перевода не переводившегося ранее стихотворения монгольского поэта Б. Явуухулана.</p></abstract><trans-abstract xml:lang="en"><p>The article by the poet and translator A. Ulzytuev discusses the unique features of Buryat-Mongolian rhyme, specifically, the tolgoy kholbokh, which occurs when the beginning rather than the ending of a line of verse rhyme. Tolgoy kholbokh (mn), or tolgoy kholbolgo (bua), literally ‘joining of heads,’ describes rhyming initial syllables, as opposed to final syllables. In his work of introducing this type of rhyme into contemporary Russian poetry, Ulzytuev discovers that, coupled with the traditional Russian ‘end-of-line’ rhyme, the use of tolgoy kholbokh makes it possible to produce authentic translations of Buryat-Mongolian poetry, at the same time enriching the poetic potential of the Russian language. He notes, however, that anaphora-based verse needs freedom of meter. The rhyme that for centuries joined ‘heads’ of poetic lines as the nomads’ tolgoy kholbokh transforms into anaphora in Russian rendering, but remains more vivid and expressive outside of the conventions of Russian or European meter when it roams free in its native ‘landscape’ of intonational rhythm. Ulzytuev includes a detailed study of rhyming and rhythmic choices in his rendering of a hitherto untranslated poem by the Mongolian poet B. Yavuukhulan.</p></trans-abstract><kwd-group xml:lang="ru"><kwd>Б. 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